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The Virgin Curse
by wanda humphries in Passion
Submitted on Wednesday 14 September, 2011, 9:08 AM
To prove to her family that not every man is driven by the appendage between his legs, Elena decides to save her virginity for marriage. But when she discovers her fiance is having an affair with her best friend her beliefs and resolve evaporate. Rating:
(56% by 38 users)
wanda humphries
Friday 23 September, 2011, 12:12 AM
Comment on Australian Chef, Spirited Dancer
Sorry Lissie, didnt mean to be repetitive, I guess I should have read the other comments!
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wanda humphries
Wednesday 21 September, 2011, 6:35 AM
Comment on Gabriel's Angel
I really liked the tender yet passionate feel to your chapter. I would have liked to read on a little a further, at least until they reached the bedroom! My advice is to watch the cliches. Things like pert bottom and hard length and butterflies in belly's are a little over used. Keep writing and good luck!
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wanda humphries
Wednesday 21 September, 2011, 6:06 AM
Comment on The Golden Eyed Greek
Great writing, fabulous pace and oh Constantine! Your my kinda man.
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