Your potential readers are busy women juggling studies, careers, families and time is precious. So, the first chapter is crucial to your romance – because if readers aren’t gripped, they’ll put your book down, never to return to it… So, here are our top tips on how to:
Grab your reader’s attention with a gripping first chapter.
A point of change, an exciting moment – such as your hero and heroine’s first meeting.
Captivate readers with your characters and make readers sympathise with them. Make sure readers engage with them emotionally – and that they are appealing and intriguing…
We’re not saying familiar scenarios can’t work (car accident, reading of the will, realising the new boss is that one night stand from last week)… Indeed you will see them in many of our published novels, but they can be difficult to carry off.
To make them successful:
So, what are you waiting for? – send those first chapters in. We can’t wait to read them.
Good luck everyone!
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Shirley Wine
Monday 10 October, 2011, 8:13 PM
After reading so many entries and commenting on most of them really brings it home to me how important the first few paragraphs of a story are.
I have to confess to having almost reached overload and if by three paragraphs in I wasn't gripped I literally had to force myself to read on to make an informed comment,
So how much harder it must be for editors who see this many stories in their slush pile most every day? This contest gives writers a rare glimpse into an editor's world.
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Eliana Robinson
Monday 10 October, 2011, 7:18 PM
Helpful pointers in this, the video is great too, clearly spoken easy to comprehend and her dress is just lovely.
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Maureen Barratt
Sunday 09 October, 2011, 11:43 AM
Thanks Flo it's great advice (wish I'd got a hang of all these sites before I'd sent my entry in). Have tried to avoid the Cliche and hope that my heroine is believable. I do like her...I like the hero even more though ;)
Fingers Xd
xxx
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