Opening Chapter Advice

by Charlotte Marshall on Monday 19 September, 2011, 2:06 PM

First chapters need to be attention grabbing!

Your potential readers are busy women juggling studies, careers, families and time is precious. So, the first chapter is crucial to your romance – because if readers aren’t gripped, they’ll put your book down, never to return to it… So, here are our top tips on how to:
Grab your reader’s attention with a gripping first chapter.

Start at an interesting point.

A point of change, an exciting moment – such as your hero and heroine’s first meeting.

  • Show the reader that the characters have just been plunged into a challenging situations- something that will test them and push them out of their comfort zone.

Make your first chapter work hard!

Captivate readers with your characters and make readers sympathise with them. Make sure readers engage with them emotionally – and that they are appealing and intriguing…

  • Establish the emotional conflict so readers are dying to know how it will be resolved.
  • Get the hero and heroine on page together quickly – show the chemistry and the dynamic between them, that immediate spark that makes the reader know they are going to fall madly in love.

Avoid cliché

We’re not saying familiar scenarios can’t work (car accident, reading of the will, realising the new boss is that one night stand from last week)… Indeed you will see them in many of our published novels, but they can be difficult to carry off.
To make them successful:

  • Choose your set-up carefully and be aware of why you are using it. Is it really the best way to bring your characters together?
  • Focus characters and explore their unique reactions to the situation – this is how you can make the familiar scenario different for your story, as well as making sure it is believable.
  • Look for ways you can twist the convention to give it your own spin and take your readers by surprise!

Here is our lovely Editor Flo with some more advice on your opening chapters. Enjoy!

So, what are you waiting for? – send those first chapters in. We can’t wait to read them.
Good luck everyone!

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  • After reading so many entries and commenting on most of them really brings it home to me how important the first few paragraphs of a story are.

    I have to confess to having almost reached overload and if by three paragraphs in I wasn't gripped I literally had to force myself to read on to make an informed comment,

    So how much harder it must be for editors who see this many stories in their slush pile most every day? This contest gives writers a rare glimpse into an editor's world.

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  • Helpful pointers in this, the video is great too, clearly spoken easy to comprehend and her dress is just lovely.

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  • Thanks Flo it's great advice (wish I'd got a hang of all these sites before I'd sent my entry in). Have tried to avoid the Cliche and hope that my heroine is believable. I do like her...I like the hero even more though ;)
    Fingers Xd
    xxx

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