George, Jen's dog, has more excitement in his life than Jen does so when the chance of romance turns up in a red sports car she has to admit she's tempted. More than tempted.
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Read Chapter One of "Making her escape"
When the good-looking new vet rescues her dog from a busy roundabout Jen is delighted and not just because George is brought home safely. Her last date, with her next-door neighbour Lucas, was a disaster; what she needs is someone to rescue her.
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Michelle Montford
Monday 10 October, 2011, 10:49 AM
Without doubt the best opening paragraph I've read in any of the entries. Made me laugh out loud and pulled me in. Love the heroine and your writing style was lovely.
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Helen Hubert
Sunday 09 October, 2011, 12:38 PM
Good characterisation, dialogue and humour. I liked it.
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