A New Mom For Abbie
- Author:
- Danielle Peck
- Category:
- Contemporary Romance
Summary
Newly unemployed school teacher Molly Harland takes a position as a nanny for CEO Alex Clark's spoiled five year old daughter. Alex wants nothing more than to be able to travel for work and not deal with his tempermental child but after hiring Molly, trav
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Chapter One
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After getting laid off from her job as a teacher, Molly does all she can to find work and finally ends up applying for a nanny/tutor position, taking care of a five year old who's father has indulged her and spoiled her to the point of being nearly intoll
About Danielle Peck
Married almost 20 years to my prince charming. We have 4 great kids, 4 cats, a dog, two frogs and a gecko. We have a great little business here in Kentucky and that gives me plenty of time to write. I write contemporary mainly and my goal is to someday ge See Danielle’s full profile
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Susan Kennedy
Thursday 13 October, 2011, 6:07 AM
Hi Danielle,
Don't worry about the spelling errors, this is a competition about voice and I think that your story certainly demonstrates that you have one! Thanks for sharing your entry and good luck with the competition!
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Melissa Lockhart
Friday 07 October, 2011, 8:06 AM
Wow, this is awesome, Danielle. It is very well written. It makes me want to read more, Continue writing this.
I actually love the fact that Harmony and Benett are mentioned. Let's see If I get this right, Harmony blames Molly for her sons death? Molly's relationship with her mother reminds me a little of something I've been through.
Alex struggles with Abbie at times, but adding Molly to the mix will help. There is plenty of room for conflict. I actually see that Harminy might be one of Molly's.
Even though I wanted to see more of Alex and Molly interact together, I love that you wrote it out that way.
The very best of louck to you. :)
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Danielle Peck
Wednesday 05 October, 2011, 4:59 PM
Thank you Chloe & Ann for the great suggestions. I appreciate the feedback :)
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