The Last Time We Met
- Author:
- Victoria Lee
- Category:
- Historical
- Mentor:
- Jeannie Lin
Summary
The last time they met, they were in love. But she was the daughter of a viscount. He was a stable boy. And then she cruelly betrayed him. Now she's fragile and alone. Now he's wealthy and powerful. She needs protection. But he only wants revenge.
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Chapter One
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England, 1820. When her younger brother William accidentally kills their odious uncle, Miranda Thornwood flees to London to seek the aid of Jason Byrne, the only man she knows she can trust, a man she had once loved, and then cruelly betrayed.
Chapter Two
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Time and their own painful secrets have severed the bonds that once bound them together. But when Miranda explains her predicament to Jason, he makes her a shocking proposition that both devastates and tempts her.
About Victoria Lee
Victoria is an overworked and underpaid civil servant (key word 'servant'). She studied history and lit, which is why she has no real marketable skills besides typing really fast. She likes cupcakes. A lot. See Victoria’s full profile
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Eliana Robinson
Friday 04 November, 2011, 12:10 PM
Hi Victoria,
Hope you are holding up alright, I've finished reading your Chapter Two and must say you should be truly proud. It was a revealing and very emotionally charged Chapter. As an entrant that missed the boat I can understand the downfall many of the writer's in this contest are feeling, but I’d like to let you know your work is spectacular, you really should finish the book I so would love to read it all and would not hesitate to buy it, Good Luck for the future
All the Best! Take care. Ella
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Eliana Robinson
Friday 04 November, 2011, 10:48 AM
Hi, Victoria
Just read Chapter One! Was a highly descriptive read and a lovely story. Really puts you in their shoes and leads you through their world. My only suggestion being; is sometime less is more I did find myself weighed down with descriptions about the surroundings at one point. Other than that I liked the story and the emotional elements were really keenly written. Over all truly a lovely read!
All the Best
Ella
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Jennifer Drogell
Friday 04 November, 2011, 2:42 AM
Agree with Anne Victoria! You have tons of talent! Write this book! Would love to read it!
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