Finding Love at Erie's Edge
- Author:
- Marcy Bassett-Kennedy
- Category:
- Warm and Cosy
Summary
Tara Reilly is determined to be made a partner in her father's real estate development firm. Ecologist Carter Donovan is leading the protest against the most important project of Tara's career. Can she get him on her side without losing her heart?
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Chapter One
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After a humiliating first meeting that involved lots of screaming and her down on all fours, Tara is mortified to discover that the man she can't face is the same one that holds the fate of her career in his hands.
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Cat Lee
Wednesday 12 October, 2011, 5:34 PM
Hi Marcy. You write really well and this is entertaining. I also think you should start with the bat incident. The dialogue after that point is great. All the best in the competition.
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Marcy Bassett-Kennedy
Friday 07 October, 2011, 12:57 AM
I agree, Romy. Unfortunately I didn't realize that until after I hit 'submit'. DOH! Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Romy Sommer
Wednesday 05 October, 2011, 3:21 PM
As others have said, Marcy, you write well and your voice is fun to read.
I loved the bat incident and that wonderful line about him wanting to get away from her as much as she wanted to get away from the bat.
I'm not sure though that you've started this story in the right place. It's a very slow build to get to the action, and I'd prefer to see the story start at the moment the bat flies at her head and she runs out screaming. The back story of why she's here could follow later.
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