Beguiling the Enemy

Well where to begin? You're a fantastic writer. My only criticism is the vampire hunter story line, it's been done so many times. I loved your writing and characters so much I still gave you four roses but you would have had five had they been in a different story. I say this with utter respect for your obvious talent. Still, enjoy writing them as you so obviously do but for the sake of getting something published you need a fresh take on the vampire thing.....trust me I have read a lot!!!!! Good luck with the comp though, my fingers are crossed for you x x