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Beguiling the Enemy

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Issy Cantrell

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Wow! What more can be said that hasn't already?

I would have liked to have seen more interraction between Kane and Caitlin, but that is only because I wanted to read on...and on...and on. I was obviously at the rear end of the patience queue.

Perhaps there is a fraction too much back story, but in a Paranormal, the setup is vital. You just can't hurry into the cute meet between the H/h, without first acquainting the reader with the necessary facts. And you have done this brilliantly.

The description of all the scenes and the action is so clearly drawn, I can see it vividly in my mind's eyes. Hard to realise I am reading a book, not watching the action unfold on TV.

And when they do meet.... Well, if I met Kane in a dark alley, he could certainly kiss me, even if he was going to kill me. Sex appeal in spades. And Caitlin is just going to be perfect as his nemesis and the right woman for him. Focused, determined, and no pushover.