Beguiling the Enemy

I’m in, bring on Chapter 2! Except that you probably also want something you can use.
Your dialogue is a tremendous strength which I think you under use. Give Caitlin and Kane a bit more to say – sure you can make it sizzle.
You capture the dynamic of the situation unfolding superbly (totally believable) but it might pay to strengthen why it is she personally is so desperate to get her hands on Kane. I know the word count for a para is longer and that you therefore have more words to play with in the set –up, but you may like to consider bringing some conflict centre stage.
That said, I don’t think your chapter suffered any from its absence.
Your writing has a film like quality to it, very real and very engaging. I was totally there with your characters. A name to watch!