Beguiling the Enemy

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Ooohh good entry - very hot alpha male that I wouldn't mind being grabbed by. Not sure on the back story at the start though - seemed a bit too much info too quickly so maybe that could be drip fed in a bit more - maybe through them talking. would definately keep reading though so well done!!

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