Beguiling the Enemy

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Dear Lindsay,
Gripping and very addictive. Loved your hero - i think my heart may have stopped when he took the belt off. i thought - well goodness I don't know what i thought but the little hint at such darkness really gave me pause to think - and then phew - he smashed the buckle! I really think paranormals need that little hint and sniff of wickedness to make it real. (does that make sense?) I want your heroine to have just the same amount of spice in chapter two - I'm sure she is up to the challenge. Well done.

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