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Beguiling the Enemy

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Well I did not find this at all confusing - I thought it flowed very well. I too know exactly what will happen in this story; it is a romance after all! However, it's the journey that counts, the journey that leads us to the HEA and I for one think this journey could be exhilerating. I thought there was suspense and spark aplenty and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Good luck for the rest of the comp x

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