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Beguiling the Enemy

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Eliana Robinson

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Hi Lindsay,
Just read your ‘Pivotal Scene’, and I have to say Kane just crossed the line. Everyone reads different things. For me I love the Hero’s that know where to step in regards to that line but who know not to cross it. There is a balance between leaving your readers asking Questions and when to answer those questions. For me the balance wasn’t level. Your hero doesn’t feel right for Mills and Boon but I’ll leave that up to the editors I just hope they keep in mind what their readers like too. Though I really do wish you all the best I’m afraid your story isn’t my cup of tea.
Good Luck!!
Ella

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