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Beguiling the Enemy

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Kathryn Neale

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OK I cannot belieeeeve I've voted for this. I mean it's about vampires! I NEVER read this stuff. Amazing what NV can make you do LOL.
It was just sooooo good. If M&B don't take it, sell the script!!!
So sexy, full of suspense, great plot, well and tightly written, very visual indeed, mostly great pace. Plus a kill-me-now hero and I-wanna-be-her heroine - absolute crackers!
There were a couple of places where it slowed too much or went on too long (nothing a large red pen couldn't solve quick). But goodness, nothing to speak of.
Really, well done! Can't NOT be in print shortly. Don't think you need 'good luck' any more! Fab.
But I'm not reading any more vampires. Unless they're yours :))
Kathryn

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