Beguiling the Enemy

Hi, Lindsay
Chapter Two was great, I loved the way the story really picked up once back at the headquarters.
Caitlin’s hesitation at the interrogation door was a great touch it added further insight into her character and showed a vulnerable and more humane side to her, makes her seem real and relatable to your readers, always a key point to watch for.
I must say that the Hero grew more likable for me in Chapter Two, however sad to say he is still too far out the felid for me; I don’t think he really is the kind of character I myself would read or write about personally. This is not to say there's anything wrong with your writing just my own likes and dislikes. Remember it is a fantastic achievement to create a story that those less inclined to read a particular sub-genre or style of character are still entice to read more.
Was a very ominous ending and defiantly leaves a reader hanging. I like the world you’ve created, and the trick with the gun, I’m sure he didn’t know what had hit him. That was very cunning and cleaver of her. The interrogation between them too was wildly creative.
All the Best
Ella