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Beguiling the Enemy

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Jo Fino

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Tense, intriguing, well written, pacy, lots of food for thought in a great storyline. I haven't read paranormals before this competition but I would definitely read on with this one. I love the dark brooding backdrop you create for your reader. I could sense danger and suspense throughout. Love the scene where Kane shoots her gun and the reader is left wondering what happened as he collapses. Being new to this genre I am enjoying all the new terms and references brought to life for me by the way you weave your plot. You must be so thrilled to be in the top 21 and your writing deserves it. The very best of luck and I'm truly looking forward to reading your pivotal moment.

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