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Beguiling the Enemy

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Allyson Armstrong

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Phewww!! Whooo!! and er... Phewww!!!

You're not messing about are you, Lindsay?

So now we know...Chapter Two didn't disappoint. I was reading this and thinking "don't end yet, don't end yet... Noooo...!!"

You've built up more tension, given us a little more background and introduced a situation where there is conflict but the potential need for them to work together. He's got what she wants - in more ways than one...

The thing is Kane is sexy because he just is - being a vampire seems incidental. He's mean - but definitely not evil through and through....

The sexual tension is off the charts. And we've now got a clearer idea of Caitlin's obsession. She's strong, determined and he's obviously got the hots for her too.