Beguiling the Enemy

Really like this entry, I think the writing is strong. I love paranormals and I read a lot of them, there are a hugh amount of vampire/vampire hunter stories out there and I am really hoping that yours is unique and different as chapter one has shown such promise. There is real tension between the two characters, I also found the very begining a little confusing, which meant that I ended up re-reading it just to make sure I understood who was who but once that was over I was impressed with the story and the high octane images you managed to evoke. Will post again once chapter two has been published on the site. SJ