Single, pregnant Lainey is not looking for love. Until Ben, with a heap of baggage, walks into her life. Will he let her show him love heals all?

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Read Chapter One of "An Accidental Family"
Lainey's world is rocked when she finds out she's pregnant. Her business is struggling and she's worried about making all those ends meet. Ben comes home on a leave of absence to help his grandma and escape the media glare--and meets an irate Lainey.
Read Chapter Two of "An Accidental Family"
Lainey discovers Ben is a reluctant gentleman and despite her best intentions, feels the beginning of attraction to him. Ben realizes he is in danger of feeling again--and that makes it even more important to keep Lainey at arm's length.
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Eliana Robinson
Wednesday 26 October, 2011, 4:00 PM
Hi Ami,
To be honest I didn’t really feel for the Heroine, I mean I could sympathize sure but feel her feelings her upset and pain, sadly no.
Though I do love the story, and how you painted the fact the father lives in L.A has this has that can’t/won’t move to her town, short of sets it up for the Hero, like fine you can’t be there fate will find her a man who can! Makes for a charming little romantic twist in shorts.
Real sweet and Charming Story.
All the Best
Ella
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Arlene Hittle
Wednesday 26 October, 2011, 3:03 PM
Congratulations on making the top 21, Ami. I can see why — this was a great entry. It sucked me right in.
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Ami Weaver
Wednesday 26 October, 2011, 1:42 PM
Thank you so much for your comments and for taking the time to read my entry. I really appreciate it! :)
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