Return to Heartbreak Hotel
- Author:
- Helen Lucas
- Category:
- Contemporary Romance
- Mentor:
- Heidi Rice
Summary
When ex-husband, Declan McAllister, turns up at the Blue Ridge Hotel, Meg's life is plunged into chaos. While he claims he wants to make a final break with the past, is there more to his re-appearance than meets the eye?
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Chapter One
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Meg is stunned when she hears her divorce from Declan McAllister may not be as done and dusted as she thought. With mounting business and money worries, another encounter with Declan is the last thing she needs. Or is it?
Chapter Two
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Reeling from the news she's still married, how will Meg react during her next encounter with Declan? Is he playing a game, or does he have issues of his own to resolve?
About Helen Lucas
Take a feisty heroine, add an Alpha hero, mix in a large dollop of sexual chemistry, and you get the kind of romances I love to write. I enjoy reading, travelling, and generally having a good time (usually involves wine and chocolate). See Helen’s full profile
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Helen Lucas
Friday 04 November, 2011, 10:47 AM
Ella,
Thanks for your lovely comments. I'm really pleased you enjoyed the two chapters. I'm working on finishing the story at the moment, so hopefully (fingers crossed), one day, you'll be able to read the rest of it.
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Eliana Robinson
Thursday 03 November, 2011, 5:45 PM
Hi Helen,
Chapter Two was just as enthralling. A real Tressure. You’ve developed a hero who is really compelling and yet really cheeky, he just loves to stir up the heroine and your wording is flowing and creative. Really hope to read more someday.
All the Best
Ella
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Eliana Robinson
Thursday 03 November, 2011, 5:14 PM
Hi Helen,
I apologise for the lateness of my comment. Life has been hectic. Though I simply had to drop by and let you know how much I enjoyed Chapter One! It was spectacular! You had me in stiches; it was comic and uplifting as well as entertaining. The last sentence was brilliant it had a musical fluent ring to it, I’m a sucker for a creative sentence and that one had it in spades! It opened up a whole lot of questions I found myself pondering whilst I refilled the tea pot. I was entranced and was truly saddened when I found it was the last page. So glad you made it to the top 21! You deserved it for sure, don't be disheartened about the top 4 I've only read chapter one of yours so far and am absolutely hooked! This is totally going on my list of books to keep an eye out for in the book stores so I sincerely hope you finish the story and one day get it out there would dearly love to read more!
Ella
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