Nineteen-year-old Identical twin sisters Lavinia and Miranda Carteret share everything except their very un-identical hopes for a husband. Only one can attend the London Season - but Miranda has a daring plan for them both to have a chance at a new life..
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Read Chapter One of "Miss Carteret's Maid"
Lavinia and Miranda's life in a tiny village with their widower father Sir James is quiet to say the least, but a big change is on its' way in the shape of their eccentric Great Aunt Augusta and the chance to go to London. Unfortunately, this is not all i
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jennifer davies
Sunday 16 October, 2011, 9:09 PM
Hi Alison,
Firstly I am not very good with feedback and I haven't read many historical romances, but I really liked this. Would like to see how you bring the hero/heroine together and build their romance and conflict. Love the premise of this endearing Cinderella type story, would love to see/ read more, cheers Jen
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Becky Lees
Wednesday 12 October, 2011, 11:53 PM
Great start! I would suggest more white space as it tires the eyes otherwise, but the story is well done.
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Lisa Reynolds
Wednesday 12 October, 2011, 5:59 PM
Loved to read a chapter that had twins. Don't know why, but I always find them fascinating. Enjoyed the idea of the rescuing of the damsel in distress! I hope I get to read more!
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